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Amoura

Guess i'm too old n you're too young, parents would probably have me hung. Though i'm as healthy as a horse, They wont let me in this race of course. can't catch this lovely one. Solo i must run, par for the course old son, when time has surely won,but chasing still is fun. "Amour" for Brian Strands Contest Name ANY 2,4,6 OR 8 LINE FORM

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/29/2011 5:02:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Don. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2011 8:46:00 AM
congrats on your featured poem this week. cory
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Date: 6/23/2011 7:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Don. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/19/2011 11:16:00 PM
funny and relaxing...good one..
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Date: 6/19/2011 3:58:00 PM
congrats on having your poem featured this week Don
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Date: 6/9/2011 8:03:00 PM
aw heck, this was better than HM. It was the funnest one I read! Congrats though, Don!
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Date: 6/8/2011 6:09:00 PM
glad to see you submitting...a charming write! ;) Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 6/8/2011 5:20:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Don. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 6/8/2011 3:07:00 PM
Congrats DON on your HM in this contest with this wow write luv.. super one and enjoy the honor..
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Date: 6/8/2011 2:12:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of brian, Don
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Date: 6/7/2011 8:41:00 PM
Guess i'm past me use by date, it's going off, we'll toss it mate, young at heart but running late, catch a slow boat to China? xo Don
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Date: 6/7/2011 8:39:00 PM
Just read Delysia's comment below. So funny. ol' geezer, but still a DON Juan! (I really liked this poem!)
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Date: 6/7/2011 4:29:00 PM
Hey, let off the young 'uns, you old geezer, you. lol. Nice one, Don. I had me a good chuckle. :))
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