Amoura

Guess i'm too old n you're too young,
parents would probably have me  hung.
Though i'm as healthy as a horse,
They wont let me in this race of course.

can't catch this lovely one.
Solo i must run, par for the course old son,
when time has surely won,but chasing still is fun.
"Amour"

for Brian Strands
Contest Name	ANY 2,4,6 OR 8 LINE FORM
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 5:02 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Don. Love, Carol
Long Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 8:46 AM
congrats on your featured poem this week. cory
Brown Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 7:09 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Don. Love, Carol
Nair Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 11:16 PM
funny and relaxing...good one..
Roberts Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 3:58 PM
congrats on having your poem featured this week Don
Dietrich Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 8:03 PM
aw heck, this was better than HM. It was the funnest one I read! Congrats though, Don!
Guzzi Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 6:09 PM
glad to see you submitting...a charming write! ;) Congrad's Light & Love
Taylor Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 5:20 PM
Congrats on your win, Don. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 3:07 PM
Congrats DON on your HM in this contest with this wow write luv.. super one and enjoy the honor..
Mehta Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 2:12 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of brian, Don
Johnson Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 8:41 PM
Guess i'm past me use by date, it's going off, we'll toss it mate, young at heart but running late, catch a slow boat to China? xo Don
Dietrich Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 8:39 PM
Just read Delysia's comment below. So funny. ol' geezer, but still a DON Juan! (I really liked this poem!)
Hendricks Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 4:29 PM
Hey, let off the young 'uns, you old geezer, you. lol. Nice one, Don. I had me a good chuckle. :))
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