Amorous Enthusiasm

Bursting with joy
What a feeling
Blasting hearts meet
Exploding and then
Obliterating each other
What a tragedy!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 23, 2010 at 8:20 PM
very witty lol, enjoyed this one...P.D.
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June 23, 2010 at 7:06 AM
Isn't that the way it seems to go with love? This scenario plays out again and again so many can relate to it, David. Great work! Love, Carolyn
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June 23, 2010 at 6:32 AM
Oh so true David, really is a tragedy, enjoyed the write ;) Wilma
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June 22, 2010 at 11:18 PM
Got the feeling,so much said in few,great work as ever!Celene!
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June 22, 2010 at 11:05 PM
It's just unbelievable! Again I so understand. Great way of describing the experience, David. Thanks for sharing and thanks for your comments on my latest. Caroline.
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