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Amongst the Flowers and Daffodils

Amongst The Flowers And Daffodils

Amongst the flowers and yellow daffodils
There she walked on all the way down the hill

She was a pure beauty, a beauty filled so bright
She sure could take one's breath away at one's sight

Often people would stop and take a long inviting look
For she was a ravishing beauty often when reading a book

Silent she was in each and every given day
For she never really wanted to stray

As she walked each day amongst the flowers and the daffodils
All alone up the greenest valleys and through the curvy hills

Amongst the prettiest flowers and yellow daffodils
Amongst the prettiest flowers and yellow daffodils.


06/06/2016

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Demetrios Trifiatis

July 25, 2016 at 5:37 AM

I would like to welcome you to the poetrysoup, our poetic family to which I wish you to embellish with your poetry dear, Rosa. Thank you for your visit and kind comment. As you know I love flowers so I did love your poem!

Rosa R. Badke

July 25, 2016 at 1:04 PM

Thank you so very much Demetrios for your great comment and welcoming me to poetrysoup. Will stop by later to read more of your great writes... Rosa

Poet Destroyer A

July 23, 2016 at 8:52 PM

Rosa, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Rosa R. Badke

July 23, 2016 at 9:49 PM

Thank you so very much Linda for your great welcome to this poetry site.. Will eventually make my way over to read some of your great poems. I haven't written much poetry. I'm more of a written columnist..Rosa

Jan Allison

July 23, 2016 at 7:57 PM

Beautifully written Rosa - made me think of the daffodils poem by Wordsworth:-) hugs Jan xx

Rosa R. Badke

July 23, 2016 at 8:01 PM

Oh, I don't even know who that is so now I have to go and borrow a book. I am not to tech savy. I know not a whole bunch of writing poetry. I always seem to take small steps... Library here I come,, haha... hugs Rosa

Skat A

July 23, 2016 at 6:37 PM

Nice, Rosa, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Rosa R. Badke

July 23, 2016 at 7:42 PM

Thank you so very much Skat for your most gracious comment and welcome greeting. I haven't been writing for long so this is one very big learning experience for me... HUGS Rosa

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