Get Your Premium Membership

Amongst All...

Amongst all, my intention was not to hurt you though I hated what you did the fact that i allowed you to pained me more Amongst all, my emotions still breed of you my nose smelt your scent that even lingers on my skin but I never wanted to make you cry Amongst all, my mind is filled with thoughts of you with bittersweet memories of what we used to be Amongst all, my heart still beats to the rhythm of our song, that we made but in time fade away and never heard to this day Amongst all, my soul is searching for a mate that knows it as much as it would, that cares but Amongst all this I wish it was me whom you never loved...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/2/2009 1:53:00 AM
Welcome to the Soup Wathuto! This is a marvelous piece, wistful and full of powerful emotion... BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith
Login to Reply
David Avatar
Wathuto Pearl David
Date: 11/5/2023 5:58:00 PM
Thank you Keith!
Date: 2/2/2009 12:39:00 AM
you still blow me away with every piece you write darling, this is a wonderful, wonderful piece that i love as well, and welcome to poetry soup, i hope you enjoy it here...
Login to Reply
David Avatar
Wathuto Pearl David
Date: 11/5/2023 5:58:00 PM
Thank you so much my darling. And thank you for this space, kana you are the one that recommended me. That was so sweet of you!
Date: 2/1/2009 1:01:00 PM
Great poem and welcome to poetry soup...Raul
Login to Reply
David Avatar
Wathuto Pearl David
Date: 11/5/2023 5:57:00 PM
Thank you Raul!

Book: Shattered Sighs