Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Poet Quintain (English)

Among the Mango Groves

Among the mango groves
                                      Rain falls in rallies, waterbeads
                               The gust of wind gather treasure-troves
                                          Of passive smell of weeds
                               In the groves,play of waterbeads, breeds

                                   The water spirals down the earth
                                        A rumpy cudden in trapeze
                                   A distant coming nature's re-birth
                                        Meandering roots squeeze
                                   A trapeze, rebirth ,trees wheeze


                                   Rain 's stopping by,a shy goodwill
                       Falling of twigs , nipped buds white sauce oozing
                            Astringent in taste sweet souls on the mill
                                  Waters sleep on the bark sousing
                       Sousing in the puddle of rain-a goodwill dousing




Manassian Quintain - Poetry Contest
Sponsor	craig cornish
07 th January,2015

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Mohan Chutani February 19, 2015 at 4:52 PM Rajat, this is an amazing resonance of experience of monsoon showers in the mango groves. the showers and the forming of playful water pools reminds one of childhood days. Congrats for fine win. Mohan

Skat A February 18, 2015 at 10:35 PM Rajat, Congratulations in Craig's contest. SKAT LOVE

Sandra Haight February 18, 2015 at 4:20 PM Congratulations on your win, for your lovely and very interesting poem, Rajat. Sandra

Richard Lamoureux February 18, 2015 at 7:54 AM Congratulations.

Janet Eaton February 18, 2015 at 6:34 AM Congratulations Rajat. Wonderful poem. Janet

Jan Allison February 17, 2015 at 4:54 PM Dropping back with my congrats Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis January 9, 2015 at 5:54 AM Natural phenomena depicted to perfection, dear friend, Rajat! Excellent work. Good luck!

Jan Allison January 7, 2015 at 5:27 PM I've never seen this form before - beautifully penned:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

M. L. Kiser January 7, 2015 at 5:02 PM Yes, that's the way! Well penned.

Andrea Dietrich January 7, 2015 at 3:53 PM great job of rhyming the end words, rajat!

Daver Austin January 7, 2015 at 2:34 PM Mango groves and nature's rebirth. What a fine sensory description this is. Thanks for dropping by. Love, daver

Sara Kendrick January 7, 2015 at 1:40 PM Creative work using some good poetic techniques..Thanks for stopping by. Sara