Among the Mango Groves

Among the mango groves
                                      Rain falls in rallies, waterbeads
                               The gust of wind gather treasure-troves
                                          Of passive smell of weeds
                               In the groves,play of waterbeads, breeds

                                   The water spirals down the earth
                                        A rumpy cudden in trapeze
                                   A distant coming nature's re-birth
                                        Meandering roots squeeze
                                   A trapeze, rebirth ,trees wheeze


                                   Rain 's stopping by,a shy goodwill
                       Falling of twigs , nipped buds white sauce oozing
                            Astringent in taste sweet souls on the mill
                                  Waters sleep on the bark sousing
                       Sousing in the puddle of rain-a goodwill dousing




Manassian Quintain - Poetry Contest
Sponsor	craig cornish
07 th January,2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/19/2015 4:52:00 PM
Rajat, this is an amazing resonance of experience of monsoon showers in the mango groves. the showers and the forming of playful water pools reminds one of childhood days. Congrats for fine win. Mohan
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Date: 2/18/2015 10:35:00 PM
Rajat, Congratulations in Craig's contest. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 2/18/2015 4:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, for your lovely and very interesting poem, Rajat. Sandra
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Date: 2/18/2015 7:54:00 AM
Congratulations.
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Date: 2/18/2015 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations Rajat. Wonderful poem. Janet
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Date: 2/17/2015 4:54:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 1/9/2015 5:54:00 AM
Natural phenomena depicted to perfection, dear friend, Rajat! Excellent work. Good luck!
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Date: 1/7/2015 5:27:00 PM
I've never seen this form before - beautifully penned:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/7/2015 5:02:00 PM
Yes, that's the way! Well penned.
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Date: 1/7/2015 3:53:00 PM
great job of rhyming the end words, rajat!
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Date: 1/7/2015 2:34:00 PM
Mango groves and nature's rebirth. What a fine sensory description this is. Thanks for dropping by. Love, daver
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Date: 1/7/2015 1:40:00 PM
Creative work using some good poetic techniques..Thanks for stopping by. Sara
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