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Among the Flowers

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                 live
                         with                                      eskance

                                  dead                                        eskewed
                                            voices...........stones
stonesofchildren,,risingveryshort,,,its..............................................never quiet

                                                         there is no 
silence..................................................................................among the flowers........
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sight poem

i do not know?

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Sue Mason

Date: 9/8/2009 8:37:00 AM

The bees are too noisy, right? LOL write here. Welcome to PoetrySoup. I hope you can stay here and learn all the different Forms so you can enter what they are instead of "I Don't Know" ... smile ... yours that I've read seem to fall under either Free Verse and/or Shape. Even though the "Form" entry falls on I don't know, if you back space up you can find Free Verse and/or down for Shape. Thanks so much for your comment on my Mayan write.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/7/2009 4:51:00 PM

i love the reading between the words..so creative..Charma

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/3/2009 8:42:00 AM

Your unique style once again, a lot to interpret between the lines. You are a gifted, poet, with your own wonderful creative look at things! Good job, Orphani