Noel Villarosa Poet Couplet

Among the Creations

13 March 2010


Among The Creations

 
I am blessed for being a God’s creation
Along with the grown-up trees, I build my own foundation

And I whisper to the mighty wind
To bestow me a seed alike wunderkind

And in this soil, I will walk barefooted
That if  Barkus is willing, my heart is embedded

I see many daybreaks and sunsets
Along flowers bloom and gaping at the night’s garnet

Luxuriate to the florid orchard
With jazzing up of the playing of harpsichord

I am falling between frustration and elation
Sighing out loud along the sea waves commotion

That in this world, I am not alone
I will thrive and shrivel among the other creations

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Jay Loveless June 1, 2010 at 11:13 AM To be one with gods creations...though we all are gods creations, we are not all at harmony with eachother....perhaps peace will be achieved if that were to happen? anyhow, nice poem, i enjoyed reading it. ~Rain

Brian Strand March 27, 2010 at 8:46 AM Thank you for supporting my contest Noel.Rgds Brian

Skat A March 21, 2010 at 3:37 PM A wonderful read . I love the way u created this poem...

Robert A. Dufresne March 17, 2010 at 6:10 PM yes we are all God's critters and creatures and creations... so all realated in that fashion as St Francis of Assisi pointed out in his writes. Good poem Noel. Nice reminder. Robert

Raul Moreno March 17, 2010 at 3:56 AM Nice couplet Noel, I love the waves commotion...Raul

Brian Strand March 15, 2010 at 1:00 AM Congrats on your featured poem today Noel.Rgds Brian and thanks for your welcome comments today

March 14, 2010 at 9:57 AM What an inspirational poem. Nice use of imagery. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Sara Kendrick March 14, 2010 at 5:28 AM Great couplet...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich March 13, 2010 at 5:52 PM Very inventive writing, Noel. Loved that last couplet! andrea

Doris Culverhouse March 13, 2010 at 3:11 PM enjoyed today!! much happiness to you and inspiration for poems

John Freeman March 13, 2010 at 11:08 AM Awesome couplet Noel. Awesome work, keep up this good work. Thanks for you kind comment today. Agape, Moses

Cecil Hickman March 13, 2010 at 9:45 AM a very inspirational write involving life with nature, with wonderful descriptions between them both very very well written,,and thank you for your words that you left behind after visiting,,,Blessings..Cecil

Carolyn Devonshire March 13, 2010 at 7:45 AM Joyful and inspirational, Noel. Keep that faith alive and you will always thrive! Love, Carolyn

Susan Palli March 13, 2010 at 3:06 AM Wonderful emotions expressed. I enjoyed that.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 12, 2010 at 8:56 PM Intensely beautiful and inspirational Noel .. enjoyed a brilliant read before sleep and this is truly beautiful...thankxxx for sharing ..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.