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Among the Creations

13 March 2010 Among The Creations I am blessed for being a God’s creation Along with the grown-up trees, I build my own foundation And I whisper to the mighty wind To bestow me a seed alike wunderkind And in this soil, I will walk barefooted That if Barkus is willing, my heart is embedded I see many daybreaks and sunsets Along flowers bloom and gaping at the night’s garnet Luxuriate to the florid orchard With jazzing up of the playing of harpsichord I am falling between frustration and elation Sighing out loud along the sea waves commotion That in this world, I am not alone I will thrive and shrivel among the other creations

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Date: 6/1/2010 11:13:00 AM
To be one with gods creations...though we all are gods creations, we are not all at harmony with eachother....perhaps peace will be achieved if that were to happen? anyhow, nice poem, i enjoyed reading it. ~Rain
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Date: 3/27/2010 8:46:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Noel.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/21/2010 3:37:00 PM
A wonderful read . I love the way u created this poem...
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Date: 3/17/2010 6:10:00 PM
yes we are all God's critters and creatures and creations... so all realated in that fashion as St Francis of Assisi pointed out in his writes. Good poem Noel. Nice reminder. Robert
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Date: 3/17/2010 3:56:00 AM
Nice couplet Noel, I love the waves commotion...Raul
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Date: 3/15/2010 1:00:00 AM
Congrats on your featured poem today Noel.Rgds Brian and thanks for your welcome comments today
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Date: 3/14/2010 9:57:00 AM
What an inspirational poem. Nice use of imagery. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 3/14/2010 5:28:00 AM
Great couplet...Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 3/13/2010 5:52:00 PM
Very inventive writing, Noel. Loved that last couplet! andrea
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Date: 3/13/2010 3:11:00 PM
enjoyed today!! much happiness to you and inspiration for poems
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Date: 3/13/2010 11:08:00 AM
Awesome couplet Noel. Awesome work, keep up this good work. Thanks for you kind comment today. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/13/2010 9:45:00 AM
a very inspirational write involving life with nature, with wonderful descriptions between them both very very well written,,and thank you for your words that you left behind after visiting,,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 3/13/2010 7:45:00 AM
Joyful and inspirational, Noel. Keep that faith alive and you will always thrive! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/13/2010 3:06:00 AM
Wonderful emotions expressed. I enjoyed that.
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Date: 3/12/2010 8:56:00 PM
Intensely beautiful and inspirational Noel .. enjoyed a brilliant read before sleep and this is truly beautiful...thankxxx for sharing ..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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