Among Crocus

among crocus
stands a lone daisy
I am humbled
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 11:27 PM
I just noticed I had remarked on this one back in August. probably I am caught up with your haiku now. Have a good night.
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December 9, 2014 at 11:26 PM
now see, here you are giving an opinion in a haiku, and I think it sound absolutely fine to do that regardless of what some in the haiku world say about that.
Mehta Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 9:36 AM
Very creative write with apt images, Charles
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August 25, 2014 at 8:10 AM
I love this. And I can see you have written many haiku since I last checked. If I were not rushing off to work I would read more. Hope I can remember them and come back to see them all!!
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