Amnesia

AMNESIA I remember old streets gray faces and jerky movements Something similar to a memory that is not of this life but mine as a vital string to an ancient of days I see eyes that see me or lives that are not smells that I have not met but I know hands saying goodbye or resigned smiles paper´s farewell especially old streets old faces old windows

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/17/2014 5:15:00 PM

Franco, Congratulations, I'm scoping and enjoying the new featured poems for this week. :) It was nice to see your poem on the poetry soups, home page. Have a fun week. Always & Forever *LINDA

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/17/2014 1:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the awesome write, franco

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2014 3:10:00 PM

Franco, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Franco Ibanez

Date: 3/1/2014 7:49:00 PM

thanks a lot but I've never had ammnesia

Skat A

Date: 3/1/2014 5:58:00 PM

Franco, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/1/2014 4:56:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Franco- I choose your first great written ballad poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many - but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 3/1/2014 1:36:00 PM

Hi Franco; This is pretty good. I never met anyone that had amnesia, but it must be hard not to remember a lot of things. Welcome to the Soup. Hope you stay and make some friends here... Lucilla

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/1/2014 11:32:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Franco - I choose your first great written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)