Ammit

Big crocodiles lips Wide hipopotomus hips.... From her paws blood drips

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/12/2010 11:23:00 PM

cool one Robb,,love it,..pd..

Noel Villarosa

Date: 11/12/2010 8:26:00 PM

Better not to use her power to look a pretty woman because many will fall on her trammel. Remarkable Senryu you have written here, Robb. Many thanks to your kind comment to my poem. (^_^) Noel.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/12/2010 3:54:00 PM

hahah, very very funny and witty write, Robb

Hathor Ammutlinra

Date: 11/12/2010 11:46:00 AM

lol , I know this Goddess very well, another way to say (AMMUT) I love it ROBB, she is my favorite Egyptian Goddess as you notice. My goddess "devourer of the Dead." My Ammut Demonic goddess who attends the Judging of the Dead. Love the description you have here yes she had the head of a crocodile, the torso of a lioness and the hindquarters of a hippopotamus. She waited in the Judgement for all them sinners to plea for the life she would not honor. Adding this to my favorites. (LIN~RA)

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 11/12/2010 11:37:00 AM

scary, well painted:)