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Big crocodiles lips Wide hipopotomus hips.... From her paws blood drips

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 11/12/2010 11:23:00 PM
cool one Robb,,love it,..pd..
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Date: 11/12/2010 8:26:00 PM
Better not to use her power to look a pretty woman because many will fall on her trammel. Remarkable Senryu you have written here, Robb. Many thanks to your kind comment to my poem. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 11/12/2010 3:54:00 PM
hahah, very very funny and witty write, Robb
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Date: 11/12/2010 11:46:00 AM
lol , I know this Goddess very well, another way to say (AMMUT) I love it ROBB, she is my favorite Egyptian Goddess as you notice. My goddess "devourer of the Dead." My Ammut Demonic goddess who attends the Judging of the Dead. Love the description you have here yes she had the head of a crocodile, the torso of a lioness and the hindquarters of a hippopotamus. She waited in the Judgement for all them sinners to plea for the life she would not honor. Adding this to my favorites. (LIN~RA)
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Date: 11/12/2010 11:37:00 AM
scary, well painted:)
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