Amiss

Of the reasons are explanations-
Pockets, frailty, disorder, excuses

Various angles of view
And I miss the bull’s eye
Score me on the fringes anyway

Am borrowed on tomorrow
Leading of life, that’s the worth
Go, in peace, from me-my loss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Baity Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 6:23 AM
Olusegun...this is really a great write..well penned...
Brown Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 11:07 AM
We are having our first laying snowfall this morning in Springfield,Ohio. December 1,2010 what a way to enter this month. It is absolutely beautiful and finds me in good spirits. I have enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Olusegun. Looking forward to reading more. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 6:51 AM
Very expressive thoughts you have penned on Amiss, Olusegun
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