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Amidst the Sunday Throngs

There amidst the Sunday throngs, People sunbathe in their thongs. Passersby are few who lack The will to just ignore the crack. Since it is a public park, There for all from dawn ‘til dark, There will always be some nuts And displayers of their butts. Freedom has a price we pay, Including bodies on display. So if a PG-scene you seek, You’ll learn to turn the other cheek!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/7/2017 2:31:00 PM
A very funny and usual scene at the beach. I believe at my age you should wear the attire you chose despite the fat or bones or breast or butt. I enjoyed our satirical humor!
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Date: 8/7/2017 8:04:00 AM
GOTD! (I didn't get around to reading it until this morning). It is hard not to return another peek;-)
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Date: 8/6/2017 7:25:00 PM
Ha ha! What a funny write Ilene! I loved reading this little poem here this evening! What a brilliant piece, such a hilarious poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/6/2017 3:17:00 PM
I laughed till I cried Ilene this is hilariarse:-) adding it to my faves:-) hugs jan xx
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