Amidst the Sunday Throngs

There amidst the Sunday throngs,
People sunbathe in their thongs.
Passersby are few who lack
The will to just ignore the crack.

Since it is a public park,
There for all from dawn ‘til dark,
There will always be some nuts
And displayers of their butts.

Freedom has a price we pay,
Including bodies on display.
So if a PG-scene you seek,
You’ll learn to turn the other cheek!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sergi Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 2:31 PM
A very funny and usual scene at the beach. I believe at my age you should wear the attire you chose despite the fat or bones or breast or butt. I enjoyed our satirical humor!
Flats Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 8:04 AM
GOTD! (I didn't get around to reading it until this morning). It is hard not to return another peek;-)
Sivey Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 7:25 PM
Ha ha! What a funny write Ilene! I loved reading this little poem here this evening! What a brilliant piece, such a hilarious poem, Great Work!!
Allison Avatar
August 6, 2017 at 3:17 PM
I laughed till I cried Ilene this is hilariarse:-) adding it to my faves:-) hugs jan xx
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