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Amidst the Rhapsody

rushing rapturous rhapsody I heard since morning light bathe the dried earth afresh tumbling on burgeon swells bulging to bubble breathe an intoxicating balm, spice waking sombre sojourners' sighs ~ ah! amidst a floating fragrances tweedles of birdies romping and so are giggles of chaps dancing, playing, prancing the skirt of trees bow languid tired from onslaught winds arms weak they fracture a few yet standing still, up High! ~

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Date: 12/29/2016 7:24:00 AM
This is as enchanting as the first time I read it, hope you and James are fine, Olive:) wishing you both a blessed New Year ahead:)
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Date: 10/9/2016 7:46:00 PM
Hi Olive, great write, loved it. take care......Vera
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Date: 9/1/2016 6:17:00 AM
Energetic write, Olive:) loved your alliteration:)
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Date: 8/23/2016 3:03:00 AM
Excellent write. Well penned too. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 8/22/2016 4:06:00 PM
Beautifully written, in your unmistakable style, Olive_eloi! Your words sing to the rhapsody, and the alliteration is fresh and bubbly. Wishing you all the best...brush your wings:) hugs // paul
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