Amidst the Rhapsody

rushing rapturous rhapsody I heard since morning light bathe the dried earth afresh tumbling on burgeon swells bulging to bubble breathe an intoxicating balm, spice waking sombre sojourners' sighs ~ ah! amidst a floating fragrances tweedles of birdies romping and so are giggles of chaps dancing, playing, prancing the skirt of trees bow languid tired from onslaught winds arms weak they fracture a few yet standing still, up High! ~
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Daniel Avatar
December 29, 2016 at 7:24 AM
This is as enchanting as the first time I read it, hope you and James are fine, Olive:) wishing you both a blessed New Year ahead:)
Duggan Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 7:46 PM
Hi Olive, great write, loved it. take care......Vera
Daniel Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 6:17 AM
Energetic write, Olive:) loved your alliteration:)
Sathasivam Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 3:03 AM
Excellent write. Well penned too. Enjoyed reading it.
Callus Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 4:06 PM
Beautifully written, in your unmistakable style, Olive_eloi! Your words sing to the rhapsody, and the alliteration is fresh and bubbly. Wishing you all the best...brush your wings:) hugs // paul
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