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Amidst the Land

AMIDST THE LAND  freedom is brandished a    given right which fell into despair    & yet  responded with answers relished bolstered   in a grand display & with flair & debate  & yet a great disdain was to be    its aftermath excelled in a show   so  mangled in deceit  & yet  conducive to the source  yielded &begins to grow      patiently awaiting   the bittersweet  paradigm     beneath a veil which every eye must see    in the sky drifting     on the wind   to extol& let begin THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived

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