Amidst the Land
AMIDST THE LAND
freedom is
brandished
a
given right
which fell into despair
& yet
responded
with answers
relished
bolstered
in a grand display
&
with flair & debate
& yet a great disdain
was to be
its aftermath
excelled in a show
so mangled in deceit
& yet
conducive
to the source
yielded
&begins to grow
patiently
awaiting
the bittersweet
paradigm
beneath a veil
which
every eye must see
in the sky
drifting
on the wind
to extol&
let begin
THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived
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