Amid Cherry Blossoms

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She strolls neath the sherry sunshade trees. Serene, the start of sown spring, slumber sate scene. Steadfast, striking, whimsical, white swans swim, mid melding of cherry blossoms. She's spellbound by silent sense of Poetic strokes spun of sweet scent soft sunshine streaks on her swollen lips. 12/27/2021 D. 9- 11- 8- 10- 7- 9- 9 12/27/2021 D. 9- 11- 8- 10- 7- 9- 9 Poetry Soup's Syllable Counter Photo 4 Swans & Cherry Bloom Trees Alliterisen 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Jan Allison

Date: 1/5/2022 5:35:00 PM

you painted a wonderful scene with your words, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Marilene Evans

Date: 1/2/2022 10:25:00 PM

Congratulations, Eve. I was fortunate to be in Washington DC during the Cherry Blossoms festival. Your poem reminds me of cherry blossoms and spring... Happy New Year! Blessings to you.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/2/2022 8:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Amid Cherry Blossoms" is a beautiful write. Love It. Have a blessed day.................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2022 12:05:00 PM

wow, those last few lines were SO gorgeous, Eve. Especially loved this: Poetic strokes spun of sweet scent Congrats to you, dear.

Joseph May

Date: 1/1/2022 9:06:00 AM

Wonderful write Eve, Congrats on your win, Happy New Year!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/31/2021 5:30:00 AM

This poem proves you are a genius of alliteration, Eve. Bravo my friend! I think this is the number one winner of this contest.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/29/2021 9:00:00 AM

This is beautiful, Eve...even your poetic strokes captivate the reader, and the use of alliteration is superb. ~ Regards and best wishes for the New Year ~ Hugs // paul