Amid Cherry Blossoms

She strolls neath the sherry sunshade trees.
Serene, the start of sown spring, slumber sate scene.
Steadfast, striking, whimsical, white 
swans swim, mid melding of cherry blossoms.
She's spellbound by silent sense 
of Poetic strokes spun of sweet scent
soft sunshine streaks on her swollen lips.

12/27/2021

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Photo 4  Swans & Cherry Bloom Trees

Alliterisen 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Jan Allison

January 5, 2022 at 5:35 PM

you painted a wonderful scene with your words, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Marilene Evans

January 2, 2022 at 10:25 PM

Congratulations, Eve. I was fortunate to be in Washington DC during the Cherry Blossoms festival. Your poem reminds me of cherry blossoms and spring... Happy New Year! Blessings to you.

Paula Goldsmith

January 2, 2022 at 8:10 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Amid Cherry Blossoms" is a beautiful write. Love It. Have a blessed day.................

Andrea Dietrich

January 1, 2022 at 12:05 PM

wow, those last few lines were SO gorgeous, Eve. Especially loved this: Poetic strokes spun of sweet scent Congrats to you, dear.

Joseph May

January 1, 2022 at 9:06 AM

Wonderful write Eve, Congrats on your win, Happy New Year!

Caren Krutsinger

December 31, 2021 at 5:30 AM

This poem proves you are a genius of alliteration, Eve. Bravo my friend! I think this is the number one winner of this contest.

Paul Callus

December 29, 2021 at 9:00 AM

This is beautiful, Eve...even your poetic strokes captivate the reader, and the use of alliteration is superb. ~ Regards and best wishes for the New Year ~ Hugs // paul