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America X

America X Daughter of revolution bred spiritually physically Out of a war of psychic hate for freedoms lost I don’t deserve their iron bowl My fear My flag my American Pride Hiding behind fronts Enemy In the enemy Inside the friend Rebuild A New America From A Melting pot of death Our core existence vanished and obsolete American freedom absent I don’t deserve their iron bow My fear my flag my American Pride The safire red burning plane bomb Buried my soul far away On valueless American land They Said Image of a raving mad war now made Buildings gradually burn in flames To the ground Our strongest vibrant buildings I don’t deserve their iron bowl My fear my flag my American Pride My buried soul still here exists The cross upon grated American Steel Our second chance They are burying And hiding behind fronts don’t deserve their iron bowl My fear my flag my American Pride The enemy inside of our skin It’s not anything we wouldn’t do We Said The daughter of Revolution The day we became a melting pot of death Our prideOur spirits Our heritage Our bravery Our Souls Don’t deserve their iron bowl My fear…my flag my American Pride Our Country Careful millennials Daughters of Revolution Don’t succumb to paths Were suicide, violence, and beatings, Of spirit stealing, saint bashing and Angels thrashing On lands near or far For the idea of America X Is life still real and visible I don’t deserve their iron bowl My fear my flag The land of American Pride Care not want not millennium child Take not want not Shan’t not be not the same fate thrice Let Us Be Brave Hope for Peace

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Date: 9/9/2016 7:45:00 AM
Hi Felicity, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 9/9/2016 2:40:00 AM
Felicity, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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