Dinda Minardi Poet Kyrielle

America - the Melting Pot of Freedom

(20/06/2011)


Ones might know the value of tolerance 
Let’s ask American for their multicultural life 
How has it been? 
Are they living in a camouflage screen? 

Ones might throw their identities 
Let’s ask American for their multicultural life  
Should we keep our ethnicities unseen? 
Or we keep our sanities in between? 

Ones might keep their entities 
Let’s ask American for their multicultural life 
Can they socialize easily? 
Or they only do chat briefly? 

Ones might blend-in perfectly 
Let’s ask American for their multicultural life 
Can they act in melting pot fairly? 
Or they mind their popularities only?

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John Posey August 14, 2013 at 6:46 PM I believe it's because of people with your perspective that America is the country people want to come to.... You will be a credit to any society.... Congratulations on your win......... Love Ya.... Jake

Donna Jones August 12, 2013 at 9:21 AM Very good questions....many people do not even know their neighbors...congratulations on your win...

Len Gasun August 11, 2013 at 12:19 AM My hearty congratulations on your win my dear friend Dinda. Thank you so much as well for sharing your excellent write. Have a grace-filled wkend! Love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Skat A August 9, 2013 at 7:25 PM a sweet win Dinda... SKAT

Poet Destroyer A August 8, 2013 at 9:13 PM Hello DInda, CONGRATULATIONS!!! With your awesome good poem' in Nathan's contest... xox Linda

Nathan D. August 8, 2013 at 8:13 PM congratulations "Nate take care

Timothy Hicks March 23, 2013 at 2:42 PM This a very interesting perspective (from the outside looking in)... I'm an American myself but I still notice some of the flaws of our culture... the part about socializing easily, but chatting briefly says a lot about the States. Where did person to person conversation go? Is now everything just screen to screen?... if you get my my meaning...

Michael J. Falotico June 20, 2011 at 2:33 PM Interesting take on the contest... def. questions needed to be answered... always Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta June 20, 2011 at 9:59 AM Very thoughtful and meaningful expressions, Dinda. Are you the same Prima? assume you change your name Dinda Minardi June 21, 2011 at 6:40 AM Yes, I'm the same Prima.. Thanks for the nice comments Dr. Ram.. :)

Carolyn Devonshire June 20, 2011 at 8:59 AM Dinda, we Americans do have a melting pot society. Many of us do try to treat people of all ethnicities equally, but there are still some vestiges of discrimination. I like to think we are making progress in resolving these issues and we've certainly come a long way in the past several decades. You pose some good questions in your poem! Got me thinking. Best wishes, Carolyn