America Heard Walt Whitman Singing

America heard you singing, Walt, 
And stopped to listen. That's our fault. 
Now our "poets" ever since 
Have written stuff that makes one wince. 

They say you've been our nation's bard; 
We should have been more on our guard. 
Now our narcissistic screeds 
Blight the land like noxious weeds. 

Self-absorption is the tool 
That makes a poet a goddam fool. 
You should be made to pay a fee 
For setting such a poor e.g.. 

Poetry should reach our minds 
But your stuff's just a rant in lines. 
You've dragged us back. We have no hope 
Of catching up with Donne or Pope. 

As for your democratic bearing, 
I didn't see you greatly caring 
When your Captain's lust to ravage 
Gave the world collateral damage. 

Even fig leaves teach us something. 
But leaves of grass cover nothing. 
I wish you were at least a clown, 
So we could laugh you out of town.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/22/2012 2:34:00 AM
A tight, cleverly-rhymed poem with apparent use of enjambment. Well done!--Ngoc
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Date: 7/21/2012 4:28:00 AM
You dared! Courageous. Well Done too!
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Date: 7/18/2012 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals James. Love, Carol
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