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Haiku is an unrhymed Japanese style poem recording the essence of a moment.

It has a nature theme which is why I personally like it nature lover that I am.

It usually consists of three lines. 5/7/5

Hidden predator Waits patiently for it's prey. Survival to the swift.

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Date: 6/11/2016 8:35:00 AM
Sadly true.
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Judy Ball
Date: 6/13/2016 6:44:00 PM
Thanks so much Lenny. God Bless, JB
Date: 6/9/2016 6:25:00 PM
yes, it's not always the strongest. Sometimes the swiftest!
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Judy Ball
Date: 6/13/2016 6:36:00 PM
Thanks so much Andrea. Any mouse will agree. You gotta be fast. God Bless, JB