December 3, 2023
For Brian Strand's A Verse Contest
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stairs oppportunism invisible flight ingrained sculpture of mental monolith clandestine & past existential root & extant present manipulative momentum & intent futuristic circumscribed eternal sanguinity in time continuum lure of nowhere infinite
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