Ambiguous Love

I   danced   around the circle how graceless i am
The tones i used to sing was no longer mine
Food id like to eat turned bitter in time
I looked at the mirror the face is not mine

How cruel the world so clueless no sign
Pieces by pieces will i ever redesign
I feign day by day that everything is fine
Love i once held was now undefined

The tramp, loafer, bummer all in  one
Whatever you call the name is one sound
Pond of lust and laughter and fun
You may win the game but your cloud has no sun

My eyes are bleeding in pain and on fire
Indomitable anger so hard to respire
Look at me now how you made me desire
Exhausted, berated, Please condole by my side
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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March 21, 2016 at 8:56 PM
Cecilia, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
Clemons Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 5:48 PM
Beautiful poem, Cecilia. Love by any means, by any situation, deeply expressed. Great piece! enjoyable overall. Check out some of mine. Peace.
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December 9, 2013 at 10:18 AM
Cecilia, this was impressive. "Your cloud has no sun"...incredible. Nice to meet you!
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December 9, 2013 at 4:06 AM
- A beautiful and touching poem Cecilia ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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