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Amberfest Ambiance

Amberfest Ambiance Ah, the orange-gold, I behold in things, Such as the amber, in my wedding ring. Invitation to a classic, zesty brunch. Heart-pounding for this splendiferous lunch. Let's begin shall we, with aromatic toast, Slathered with orange jam and golden, Hawaiin honey.(Tis the most) Gratefully, we do have enough money, To eat oudoors, and the Pacific Coast is a honey. Oh, my eager taste buds start to roast! Eggs Benedict with perfect golden orbs! Having breakfast on the azure Pacific Shore. How could I ask, for anything more? The scent of fresh California orange juice, In an amber goblet, ah, turn it loose! This is my divine amberfest breakfast. Divinity~full of color and golden pizazz!. So very blessed and extraordinarily, first class! 1/27/2024

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Date: 2/24/2024 3:34:00 PM
Mmmm what nice eating, LOL <3 xx
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Date: 1/29/2024 5:03:00 PM
Your poem is popping with colors and flavors, scenes and smells. Everything you've written here is a magnet for the senses! (meanwhile I'm filling the woodstove with logs which is a pretty good sun backup)
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Date: 1/29/2024 5:51:00 PM
Hi David! Love the idea of a woodstove and, ahh,,,that scent! Glad you pointed out the specifics in my poem that stood out for you. It is a great reminder to use more in future poetry! Warmish here, and living in a nutty state that clamps down on all things that a human enjoys. More like a jail we even have the water police here! I remeber when CA allowed freedom of choice and speech. Not anymore ..waiting for Goebbels to come back to life,,golly! Maybe one day CA will be . Sad to see it grow worse each year.. Hugs,Pangie xx
Date: 1/29/2024 9:14:00 AM
A very colorful poem to enjoy. Great use of imagery
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Date: 1/29/2024 9:25:00 AM
So glad you expressed yourself today. Thank you, have a rainbowed day. Hugs,Pangie xx
Date: 1/29/2024 2:02:00 AM
I am all for Italian and French cooking, but the evil one sent me some diabetes. I have to be careful.
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Date: 1/29/2024 3:33:00 AM
Dear Soul, Oh that must be irksome as Italiam and Frebch cuisine is so exquisiet our tastebuds..same for me, Please be careful with diabetes, Victor, Wishing you the best… Pangie xxx
Date: 1/28/2024 8:46:00 PM
A warm poem where amber reigns. I felt the sunshine while reading it. Thank you.
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Date: 1/28/2024 9:01:00 PM
Good evening! I played a guessing gamr and bet it would ve you! Hurrah I was right. So glad you read this rather esoteric wor.k. Its highly rinal and makes a direct appeal to the senses, amber and waarnth.. i see where do you put up on the warm?. That really pleases me, Hilda. I had a wonderful day and reading. This only makes my bedtime enjoy tonight to feel like something.. thank you for the great gift, Huggs, Pangie.xxxx
Date: 1/28/2024 11:29:00 AM
Panagiota, What a pleasure for all palates in 'Amberfest Ambiance'. Your Rhyme fairly sings with a jaunty zest. Enjoyed this brunch with orange jam & Hawaiian honey; life's best in fine company. -Richard
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Date: 1/28/2024 11:55:00 AM
Greeting, Richard. Wonderful to see you.! I really enjoyed your evaluation of the poem and you’re feeling about it, I had third, fourth and fifth abou posting this. so I am glad to see that people liked it. The more comments I read the hunger I get.lOL Pangie xx
Date: 1/28/2024 11:11:00 AM
Quite the yummy poem with a tropical ambience.
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Date: 1/28/2024 11:51:00 AM
Kim, you a quite the connoisseur! What ‘s more, is a very brilliant short comment.)) I go on and on and on as you know. I have yet to learn brevity and comments..)) Huggs, Pangie xx
Date: 1/28/2024 11:00:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun/colorful "Amberfest Ambiance" write. You are making me hungry. Let's eat!!! Hugs... Have a wonderful day/week................
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Date: 1/28/2024 11:48:00 AM
LOL Paula! It makes me hungry as well. Kind of a unique poem! Speaking of food, I can never write a Halibun because as a child, I was forced to eat halibut every Friday and I hated it, I just thought I’d come out of the closet and tell Poets why I never write a halibun.. ))) I didn’t know that a Monoku is simply a One line Haiku. I never heard it descibed that way..we follow rules for Haikus here, but not Monokus?)) Hope you have a great day,my friend. Huggs,Pangie xx Thank you, Paula, Pangie xx
Date: 1/28/2024 8:33:00 AM
love all those golden, amber-colored things you mentioned. Amberfest...a clever title for your creation. Eggs Benedict = my favorite breakfast. Yum. Thanks for sharing this morning, hugs, Sara
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Date: 1/28/2024 10:28:00 AM
Hi Sara! I haven’t had eggs benedict for a long time. Memories, of those breakfasts are really outstanding. And picturesque memories. The people were all dressed so well! This was the early 70’s,! San Francisci gets worse each year., to me…what a great loss. Thank you for taking the time to share your love a my favdish! And appreciating the poem..))) Huggs, Pangie cx
Date: 1/28/2024 8:28:00 AM
Sounds luxuriously delicious in food and memories, dear Pangie. A big bravissimo! xxo
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Date: 1/28/2024 10:16:00 AM
Hello, Regina. These were really luxurious brunch es at the Hyatt Regency in San Francisco.. Always I remember them and the great food. I usually don’t right this way.. but I was pleased with the result. Glad that you blessed me with above a bravissimo. Thank you. What a friend you are.! Huggs, Pangie xx

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