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Amber Sighs

Darkened blood Through blackened veins Dripping From blue fangs.... Purple tears Within grayish eyes Spilling ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ These amber sighs!? Note: Smile ~ "In The End," by Linkin Park ~ "Love," John!:) ~

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Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 4/29/2011 12:07:00 AM

BRAVO! Reminiscent of thee illiquid soliloquy of Mr. Haan! Effervescence fused with rambunctiousness, vigor and vim! Oh how I love blackened veins. Bodes supreme by the belly with a port wine demi glace and shallots of course. Oh yes, and fava beans! Poignant indeed! Alas, pass the Thousand Island and Busch Light~ Dinner is Served...BRAVO... ~JSLambert 10,000 reads! Rate 8.7!

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/2/2011 6:46:00 AM

hello John. it was very kind of you to comment on my poem, especially after all this time. very much appreciated. hope life is good in your world. my very best wishes, shar

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/29/2010 6:51:00 AM

Just stopping by today to thank you for all your comments. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today John. Happy New Year to you and yours. Love, Carol

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 12/2/2010 9:26:00 AM

Very mysterious. .tears. .purple tears are heartbreaking. .that gray sound ashy sad. .and the dark blood. .its haunting,yet excellently penned :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/2/2010 9:20:00 AM

I really like the way you used so many colors to set a mood in this poem, John. Like Andrea, I'm wondering about the nature of this creature with "blue fangs." Very intriguing write, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 11/30/2010 3:40:00 PM

You really are 'on a roll', as remarked by Carol. There's something ending, and whatever it is you appear to see through "These amber sighs". Have a great evening. Best to you and yours, John! Love to you, Mikki

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/30/2010 12:43:00 PM

This is a vivid picture of something wretchedly dead, John..a wolf or some kind of creature?! Fantastic description as always, John. Frightful, but very good. Love, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/30/2010 6:05:00 AM

You are on a roll simply amazing John. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 11/30/2010 5:08:00 AM

wowJohn. These images are awesome, and chilling.