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Amazon Princess

A Prince once met a princess, this was what he thought... She's not used to someone this young But at Parlour something Beautiful Sprung Fate at it's finest. First person I laid my eyes upon, turned out to by my highness. She was lovely down to earth, not to mention the spirit. I hoped we both could feel it. So we sat and had a drink. Hours passed by in minutes, and I just had to think. She had me at Toika lounge feeling like the luckiest fellow. If she preferred an orchestra, I'd be her main cello. Little did she know, this Princess was in the company of a Prince. Amazonian Tiger scratched me with her caramel prints. And he was going to show her his all. Make her truly feel like the angel, wingless born, bet she crawled. Wish to Be her knight in shining armor and all. She would have all her angled covers, the second she called. Never too soon and definitely never too late. For a princess and prince, to come to terms with their fate. And in fact, Alana, you bring out my best manners. And it matters to me. Cause in your presence I wanna be the best I can be. Because I know that's what you deserve. Breathtaking personality, in reality, blessed with dangerous curves. Always had me listening, as if she had super powers. If she was a line-up I'd wait for days and hours. Standing there, dressed up with a smile, holding her favorite flowers. So don't mind little old me. Standing her with a lily. Hope you find it cute, cause sharing this it made me laugh and I felt a bit silly. Your Prince, Hani G.G.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/31/2014 1:08:00 AM
Nice write, Hani! Well done! Pandita
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Date: 8/10/2014 12:43:00 PM
That's a very interesting love story. Thanks for sharing it with me! Keep writing.
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Date: 8/9/2014 1:35:00 AM
I really enjoyed your latest poem, Hani! Thank you for letting me know about it! This is a clever love story, with a more modernized twist on the classic fairy-tale prince and princess. Great work! :)
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Date: 8/8/2014 3:21:00 PM
Hi Hani, "Amazon Princess" has merit. I read all of your works here. "A Second Thought" is your best poem. If you want a more comprehensive critique of your works by me, email me at earlschumacker@yahoo.com. Earl
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Date: 8/8/2014 1:07:00 PM
- I will gladly read your poem Prince Hani! - "Amazon Princess" is a really great poem, enjoy reading it :) - Anyone who writes comments on my poems will always get comments back from me - Sounds silly .......... but that's how you get readers :) - Have a nice weekend! // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/7/2014 11:59:00 PM
Hi Hani , beautiful poem , loved it....
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Date: 8/7/2014 3:34:00 AM
Hani I really did enjoy that, what a beautiful story, thank you so much for sharing, keep it up. take care...............Vera............
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Hani Gholami
Date: 8/7/2014 11:40:00 PM
Thank you Vera, I am very glad you enjoyed this read. Cheers my friend, Hani.

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