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~ heaven's joyous weep, seeds your mighty slink, seaward ... through jade labyrinths. ~ ~ 7th Place ~ in the "Water Themed Haiku" Poetry Contest, Tania Kitchin, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 8/24/2018 7:14:00 AM
This haiku is even more lovely than the photo that accompanies it, so this is saying a bunch. Wow!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/26/2018 1:32:00 AM
Thank you very much, Caren ... I appreciate it.
Date: 8/18/2018 5:27:00 PM
So beautiful...jade labyrinths! Congratulations, Greg!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/18/2018 11:12:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Kim, I'm pleased you liked it, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 8/17/2018 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Excellent haiku painted by an artist of words. :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/18/2018 3:24:00 AM
Oh, you are so kind to me, Susan, thank you so very much, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 8/15/2018 1:08:00 PM
Love the jade imagery, Gregory. Congrats on your win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/15/2018 9:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Dear Line! :-) <3
Date: 8/15/2018 9:49:00 AM
This is a superb haiku. My personal favorite of this contest. Such great imagery.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/15/2018 9:57:00 PM
That's really very kind of you, Jesse, and it means a great deal. Blessings and thanks, my friend! I know Haiku is usually a snapshot, but I like to try and tell as much of a story as I can with those few syllables. :-)
Date: 8/15/2018 9:44:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Greg, congratulations on your fantastic win. Eve~`*
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/15/2018 9:56:00 PM
Thank you very much, Eve, I'm so pleased you liked it, my friend. Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 8/15/2018 5:15:00 AM
A very beautiful haiku, congratulations on your win in the contest!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/15/2018 9:53:00 PM
I am so honored, Tania, thank you so much! Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 8/14/2018 12:14:00 PM
your imagery is impeccably done, I like this so much.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/15/2018 9:52:00 PM
That's very sweet of you, Caren, thank you so much, Dear Poet! :-) <3
Date: 8/14/2018 11:24:00 AM
Oh my, look at that sky!!! Your thoughts paint such a beautiful picture. I can feel the light breeze upon my skin. Moments of a tender calm. I breathe in softly. ~ Brandy
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/15/2018 9:52:00 PM
This is such a lovely comment, Brandy ... your comments are poetry in themselves, and I love that about you - you NEVER waste a word. Many thanks and blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 8/14/2018 7:21:00 AM
Beautifully painted....
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/15/2018 9:50:00 PM
Thank you kindly, John! :-)