Gregory Richard Barden Poet Haiku

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 ~     heaven's joyous weep,



                          seeds your mighty slink, seaward ...



                through jade labyrinths.     ~ 







~ 7th Place ~  in the "Water Themed Haiku" Poetry Contest, Tania Kitchin, Judge & Sponsor.

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Caren Krutsinger August 24, 2018 at 7:14 AM This haiku is even more lovely than the photo that accompanies it, so this is saying a bunch. Wow! Gregory Richard Barden August 26, 2018 at 1:32 AM Thank you very much, Caren ... I appreciate it.

Kim Rodrigues August 18, 2018 at 5:27 PM So beautiful...jade labyrinths! Congratulations, Greg! Gregory Richard Barden August 18, 2018 at 11:12 PM That's very kind of you, Kim, I'm pleased you liked it, my friend! :-) <3

Susan Gentry August 17, 2018 at 7:12 AM Congratulations on your win. Excellent haiku painted by an artist of words. :) Gregory Richard Barden August 18, 2018 at 3:24 AM Oh, you are so kind to me, Susan, thank you so very much, my friend! :-) <3

Line Gauthier August 15, 2018 at 1:08 PM Love the jade imagery, Gregory. Congrats on your win. Gregory Richard Barden August 15, 2018 at 9:59 PM Thank you so much, Dear Line! :-) <3

Jesse Rowe August 15, 2018 at 9:49 AM This is a superb haiku. My personal favorite of this contest. Such great imagery. Gregory Richard Barden August 15, 2018 at 9:57 PM That's really very kind of you, Jesse, and it means a great deal. Blessings and thanks, my friend! I know Haiku is usually a snapshot, but I like to try and tell as much of a story as I can with those few syllables. :-)

Eve Roper August 15, 2018 at 9:44 AM Beautiful imagery, Greg, congratulations on your fantastic win. Eve~`* Gregory Richard Barden August 15, 2018 at 9:56 PM Thank you very much, Eve, I'm so pleased you liked it, my friend. Blessings! :-) <3

Tania Kitchin August 15, 2018 at 5:15 AM A very beautiful haiku, congratulations on your win in the contest! Gregory Richard Barden August 15, 2018 at 9:53 PM I am so honored, Tania, thank you so much! Blessings! :-) <3

Caren Krutsinger August 14, 2018 at 12:14 PM your imagery is impeccably done, I like this so much. Gregory Richard Barden August 15, 2018 at 9:52 PM That's very sweet of you, Caren, thank you so much, Dear Poet! :-) <3

Brandy Nicole August 14, 2018 at 11:24 AM Oh my, look at that sky!!! Your thoughts paint such a beautiful picture. I can feel the light breeze upon my skin. Moments of a tender calm. I breathe in softly. ~ Brandy Gregory Richard Barden August 15, 2018 at 9:52 PM This is such a lovely comment, Brandy ... your comments are poetry in themselves, and I love that about you - you NEVER waste a word. Many thanks and blessings, my friend! :-) <3

John Lawless August 14, 2018 at 7:21 AM Beautifully painted.... Gregory Richard Barden August 15, 2018 at 9:50 PM Thank you kindly, John! :-)