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Amazing You

I have been wrapped up in time, not paying attention Feeling left out from the thrill of victory The agony of defeat, or that honorable mention That friendly note, that implies you get me There is a delicate wave of give and take It's what draws me back to this amazing place I sometimes wonder how I can relate Imagining your words, imagining your face To seize life by the moment, is truly a gift I falter in my own theory's, this is too true But, it's you know who, who gives me a lift And your unconditional love is amazing too

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/21/2013 9:36:00 AM
You still have that amazing gift . Keep on visiting and revisiting this place. It is an amazing corner of our resilience.
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Date: 7/11/2013 7:54:00 AM
amazing is one,... :-) thank you for taking your time, in sharing a bit of your grandfather that ugly disease takes more than we know... . I am never happy these days now. however I manage to smile. and thank you for making me smile with your visit. always and always your friend.... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/21/2012 10:17:00 PM
MITCH,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*
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Date: 9/14/2012 3:09:00 PM
A great poem. Keep writting.
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Date: 7/31/2012 11:33:00 PM
A late congrats *luv* Skat
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Date: 7/29/2012 9:28:00 PM
Hi Mitch;-), i'm a little late,, but I'm here to .. Congratulate all my sisters winners.. Your entry was deep and straight forward. Thank you for supporting my sisters contest.. have yourself a good night~XOX~TEX
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Date: 7/27/2012 8:51:00 PM
Congrats, Mitch. Excellent. Great job. Kudos. Ralph
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Date: 7/27/2012 11:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Give It To Me Straight" contest Mitch. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/25/2012 11:14:00 AM
Congrats on your win Mitch
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Date: 7/25/2012 4:11:00 AM
Mitch super congrats on your win, excellent write...David
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Date: 7/16/2012 3:30:00 AM
To my surprise it's you Mitch... xox~ how are you??? good night...pd
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Date: 7/14/2012 10:11:00 AM
Happy weekend to you Mitch. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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