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AMAZING APPLE Double Acrostic An Apple a day keeps the Doctor away. Mesmerized Eve tasted to bite and ate half. Adam ate rest half as offered by Eve, his better-half. Zeal, vigor, wit, wisdom was achieved by them. Inevitable intimacy happened as the couple claimed. Naked couple dressed themselves getting inspiration. Great pair started Human Civilization. Apple ripened, easily detached from stalk and fell on ground. Paradoxical seemed to Great Scientist, when he found. Perceived clearly by Physicist Sir Isaac Newton. 'Law of Gravitation' came on realization. ‘Eat an apple everyday to stay strong.' Doctors tell all along. 12/10/16 Re- Edited on 08/20/21 'A Brian Strand 3 to 14 lines' Contest by Brian Strand

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Date: 8/21/2021 11:15:00 AM
Religion and science, an odd pair, and a smile on your last line, Anisha. My compliments for your win my friend, Aloha!
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