Amazing

It’s something of a miracle, isn’t it, 
		how words are plastic magic and can fly, 
		given the proper propellant, 
		which in my opinion is “need,” 
		a compulsion to commit to paper 
		or to a listener’s ear 
		or a reader’s eye 
		the gist and heart 
		of that maelstrom 
		of syllables and sounds 
		screeching around 
		in some very needy cavern 
		buried deep in that mine 
		we call mind?
 
		Amazing...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Hicks Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 8:36 AM
This was very well done, my friend. Yes... no matter how creative we seem at the time the key is a "need to express" that is most important. I often wonder where the words come from... loved this! Going to my favorites :)
Jordan Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 9:59 AM
Thanks, Tim, especially for the favorites... Jack
Anglesey Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 12:29 PM
I love this amazing piece. Perfection
Jordan Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 1:01 PM
Wow! Thank you, Karen for the compliment... Jack
Tacito Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 9:29 AM
Fantastic interpretation of the human mind! Great flow here.
Jordan Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 9:38 AM
Thanks for the comment, Drake... Jack
Gildersleeve Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 8:40 AM
Jack love your cavern of your mind. Fabulous thoughts you've committed on paper for all of us to enjoy. An inspiration you are with words. Warm Smiles, Connie
Jordan Avatar
April 29, 2013 at 9:38 AM
Thank you, Connie, for the compliment... Jack
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