Amateur Girlfriend

Ok I'll get to the point 
I'm here with a list of fears, needs and demands
So I may get on your nerves sometimes
Truth is I don't know how to play this girlfriend game
I get needy and vulnerable and messy
You should know this

I'm not used to this dating thing so I might break a few rules
Like that "thrill of the chase" or "don't be clingy stuff"
I want to throw myself at you
I want to find something in your presence that reminds me of how we make love and when we do, 
I want to lose myself in you

But I'm awkward and clumsy
Sometimes I leave these insecurities lying around, if you bump into one, say hello
I left my fears all over the floor with last night's underwear
So....if you happen to trip over them don't turn a blind eye
Get fully acquainted with whatever ugliness I have about me
I'm bossy, I'm fussy and I nag a lot 
But you already know

I had hidden a host of imperfections underneath my eyes, my smile, my hair, my silly jokes 
Or whatever it is you like so much about me
I was afraid you'd find them
But I knew you loved me when you stayed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Agustin Avatar
February 6, 2025 at 12:54 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.
A  Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 7:58 PM
Tshego, ONCE AGAIN Congratulations on your win. SKAT
Khumalo Avatar
May 3, 2015 at 6:44 AM
A million thank yous :-)
Khumalo Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 3:44 PM
*minus the typos*
Khumalo Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 3:39 PM
:-) thank you all, I really apprecuate your support...makesme want to take this poetrystuff to the stage now...soon as I get over my crowdjitters:-)
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 1:07 PM
great honest write - we all have insecurities but with the right person anything is possible in love:-) great win congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
A  Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 10:16 PM
Hi Tshego, Congrats on your awesome win! ~SKAT~
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