Amaorotic Senses

Written: 06-30-2011

Cotton on a breeze
  In the field I take my please
Close my eyes to feel

~*Wandering*Butterfly*~
Miranda Lambert
For: Pseudo-Haiku-Chris Aechtner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Moriarty Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 3:32 PM
Used to raise cotton on my land, I know just what you mean...I have a lot of problems expressing myself in the Haiku form, you do it beautifully...thanks so much for your write..Rich
Mehta Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 12:48 PM
Wonderful entry to the contest, good luck, Randa
Mehta Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 12:48 PM
Wonderful entry to the contest, good luck, Randa
Brown Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 12:38 PM
Stopping by your amazing poetry to thank you for your kind comments on mine Randa. Love, Carol
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