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Am In Love With the Wind

In the realm of dreams and gaiety
A rose blooms in my heart, glamour strikes with vivacity 
My stretched hand reaches to fondly pet the palm 
But like wind, the goddess ghostly evanesces with a calm 
Dotingly I endeavor to serenade the enchantress. 
 
Off the warbling lute the soft ditties sing 
From the changing tune, the pitch to the ears sting 
Yet with a sparkling giggle your spook infatuate 
With fortitude, realms I’ll cross to graduate 
The school of endurance you command with shrewdness 
 
With agility I fly, but you’re too fast to reach 
Roaring water crushes at the beach 
Sand so calm I hanker to hold 
The setting shining sun glares, with a frail I behold 
Because am in love with the wind 
 
Slacken my love! Off my feet you sweep with desire 
My heart you take; sturdily I admire 
Like a magnet, your enigma besots with charm 
And the goal to get I’ll praise with a psalm 
For I loathe to crush on the wind 
 
The world will mock, but the love will shush the chatter
A future so bright they’ll hail the latter 
And applaud our allure’s perpetuity 
With fantasy our posterity shall sing of a deity 
For all is possible, even love with the wind!

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Beata Agustin

Date: 9/27/2023 7:46:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts, wisdom-filled through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Tonnie MAC.
Date: 9/27/2023 12:09:00 PM

Am honoured Beata. Thank you for your kind words and for the beautiful love you share through John 3:16. It is in deed the greatest of all, just like the greatest commandment of all. Love! ??

Tonnie MAC.

Date: 9/25/2023 12:54:00 PM

The poem expresses the love and longing for someone who is elusive and mysterious, like the wind. The poem uses the metaphor of the wind to represent the lover’s beauty and charm, and the contrast between the reality and the fantasy to represent the challenge and hope of the relationship. It also uses various examples and scenarios to illustrate the feelings and actions of the lover, such as flying, singing, and praising. The poem is written in English, and it has a musical and lyrical style.