AMLT, don't know if this is what you wanted or something shorter. Changed your lines slightly.
Check it out: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/finish_the_verse_867597
Am I the only one who believes in love and wishes upon a star? Am I the one who feels the magic touch of gentle whispers from afar? Could I stand the burning pain of losing you to another's lonely dreams? Could I want you still more when the planets align in golden moonlit beams? Would your mystic bright smile warm my heart with love and bewitch my fantasies? Would you let your light shine on this broken soul and forgive my lunacies? 01-21-17
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