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AMLT, don't know if this is what you wanted or something shorter.  Changed your lines slightly.

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Am I the only one who believes in love and wishes upon a star? Am I the one who feels the magic touch of gentle whispers from afar? Could I stand the burning pain of losing you to another's lonely dreams? Could I want you still more when the planets align in golden moonlit beams? Would your mystic bright smile warm my heart with love and bewitch my fantasies? Would you let your light shine on this broken soul and forgive my lunacies? 01-21-17

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Date: 11/10/2018 8:11:00 PM
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James Inman
Date: 11/10/2018 8:27:00 PM
: ) Always.
Date: 2/5/2017 5:03:00 AM
Oh...you are not the only!:D.. you speak out the dream of so many...well phrased. :)
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James Inman
Date: 2/5/2017 8:27:00 AM
Thank you again for your visits and the lovely comments Sunita.
Date: 1/22/2017 7:57:00 AM
This is superb writing, James :) a 7:)
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James Inman
Date: 1/22/2017 11:58:00 AM
Thank you Jo.

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