Am I Even Awake

(Inspired by lyrics of Bonamassa's "Woke Up Dreaming")

Sometimes life can be very hard.
My dog died. Worse though,
my sweetie’s not around.
Feeling so morose; 
feeling so forlorn.
Where’s that good fortune
I thought I once had found?

Is this world our reality?
Folk’s going crazy.
A nightmare more it seems.
Politicians lying; 
sad people crying.
Are we still alive
or just living bad dreams?

I pinch myself and sometimes I think
maybe we even 
pinch ourselves in dreams.
Life hurts. Dreams hurt. 
My health’s worth dirt.
Folks going crazy.
A nightmare it all seems.

Dog’s doggone; wish he never died.
Miss my sweetie so.
In my heart’s a giant ache.
The world is careening. 
Somewhere someone’s screaming.
Are we all dreaming?
Am I even awake?

The world is careening.
Somewhere someone’s screaming.
Are we all dreaming?
Am I even awake?

May 20, 2023 For the 'Smokin Joe Bonamassa Inspiration' Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Robert James Liguori
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Maverick Avatar
May 23, 2023 at 11:05 PM
What is happening the buildings alight and They feed the fire.? There is human augmentation..? How are you I read of challenge Here.' God be with you.!
Kendrick Avatar
May 22, 2023 at 3:59 AM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Is this about a recent pet? Sorry if so. Thanks for sharing. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
May 21, 2023 at 6:06 AM
You should submit your lyrics to some music company, You might strike gold.
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2023 at 7:17 AM
Thanks, Victor. Wish I had any connections or understanding of it.
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