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Am I Even Awake

(Inspired by lyrics of Bonamassa's "Woke Up Dreaming") Sometimes life can be very hard. My dog died. Worse though, my sweetie’s not around. Feeling so morose; feeling so forlorn. Where’s that good fortune I thought I once had found? Is this world our reality? Folk’s going crazy. A nightmare more it seems. Politicians lying; sad people crying. Are we still alive or just living bad dreams? I pinch myself and sometimes I think maybe we even pinch ourselves in dreams. Life hurts. Dreams hurt. My health’s worth dirt. Folks going crazy. A nightmare it all seems. Dog’s doggone; wish he never died. Miss my sweetie so. In my heart’s a giant ache. The world is careening. Somewhere someone’s screaming. Are we all dreaming? Am I even awake? The world is careening. Somewhere someone’s screaming. Are we all dreaming? Am I even awake? May 20, 2023 For the 'Smokin Joe Bonamassa Inspiration' Poetry Contest Sponsor: Robert James Liguori

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Date: 5/23/2023 11:05:00 PM
What is happening the buildings alight and They feed the fire.? There is human augmentation..? How are you I read of challenge Here.' God be with you.!
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Date: 5/22/2023 3:59:00 AM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Is this about a recent pet? Sorry if so. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Date: 5/21/2023 6:06:00 AM
You should submit your lyrics to some music company, You might strike gold.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/21/2023 7:17:00 AM
Thanks, Victor. Wish I had any connections or understanding of it.

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