Am I Done

Feels a long way sometimes
A long road if not a lonely one
For the sun never always shine
And how did I know I’m done?

Yet a night to sometimes present a light
As oppose to mornings in the dark
An afternoon perhaps it just might
Whence a simple soul shall share a likeliness apart

Perhaps only nearer the road shall be
Never too far we always do tend to stray
And as always its only further we see
When we foolishly agree how life never is okay

How is to oppose I’m never to know
How do I agree, how do I pretend?
And how much more is there life to show?
For whence ever alive...there never is an end

Been a long way... sometimes
My long road if it ain’t a lonely one
Have I forgotten to see a Sun there shine?
Yet somehow I know I’m done
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Williams Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 1:22 AM
Joel great flow..David
Lee Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 3:23 AM
thks David... i always do love writing poetries which rhyme... and shall continue to do so...:D
Chebukina Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 12:55 AM
Wow. this is amazing. i absolutely love it.. Sign, Anya
Lee Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 3:25 AM
Aw... am glad to have such capabilities to amaze... :D Am bold to say that i didn;t know i had it in me... cheers:D
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