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Am I Done

Feels a long way sometimes A long road if not a lonely one For the sun never always shine And how did I know I’m done? Yet a night to sometimes present a light As oppose to mornings in the dark An afternoon perhaps it just might Whence a simple soul shall share a likeliness apart Perhaps only nearer the road shall be Never too far we always do tend to stray And as always its only further we see When we foolishly agree how life never is okay How is to oppose I’m never to know How do I agree, how do I pretend? And how much more is there life to show? For whence ever alive...there never is an end Been a long way... sometimes My long road if it ain’t a lonely one Have I forgotten to see a Sun there shine? Yet somehow I know I’m done

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/2/2012 1:22:00 AM
Joel great flow..David
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Joel Lee
Date: 5/2/2012 3:23:00 AM
thks David... i always do love writing poetries which rhyme... and shall continue to do so...:D
Date: 5/2/2012 12:55:00 AM
Wow. this is amazing. i absolutely love it.. Sign, Anya
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Joel Lee
Date: 5/2/2012 3:25:00 AM
Aw... am glad to have such capabilities to amaze... :D Am bold to say that i didn;t know i had it in me... cheers:D

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