Janet Vick Poet Senryu

Alzheimer's Parody

her mask unchanging
rippling reality stints
despair’s fiery pits

sanity tilted
crust layered with razor blades
echo touched voices

opposites control
revolving kaleidoscope
serene destruction

sketchy shadow paths
Alzheimer’s parody stains
fog filled memories


Janet L Vick

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Mahtab Bangalee April 28, 2019 at 5:45 AM strikes good parody in every stanza (senryu)

Susan Linn April 21, 2019 at 7:43 PM A terrible disease indeed - rippling reality is the perfect description. Thank you for sharing.

Poet Destroyer A April 27, 2014 at 2:30 AM Janet... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA

Ralph Sergi April 25, 2014 at 3:07 PM Hi Janet, nice to know you. A great poetic description of the downfall of the mind, especially "serene destruction" which connotates to me as a slow breaking down down of the memory bank. My compliments.

Judy Ball January 15, 2012 at 8:44 AM This is so sad Janet. It must be horrible to have that. It hurts to watch a loved one sink slowly into helpless oblivion. God Bless, JB Janet Vick January 16, 2012 at 12:59 PM It certainly takes the toll on the care givers too. Thanks for reading and commenting. Janet

Harry Horsman January 12, 2012 at 2:34 PM Been there, Janet, these are excellent. harry Janet Vick January 13, 2012 at 6:56 PM Thank you for commenting and reading. Not the place any of us want to be. Take care. Janet

Doris Culverhouse January 7, 2012 at 8:05 PM enjoyed reading your work....have a family of dementia is so sad to have a body with no clarity... Janet Vick January 8, 2012 at 12:38 PM Thank you so much for reading. Dementia is something I hope never to have. Take care. Janet

Andrea Dietrich January 4, 2012 at 11:25 PM this set surely gives us the impression of that terrible disease, Janet. Very interesting way to express feelings about it with these senryu. Clever! Janet Vick January 5, 2012 at 10:39 AM Thank you. Several of my friends asked me if I wrote any poems about dealing with mom. At that point, I hadn't but I have gradually dealt with it in words. Again Thanks. Janet

Krystal Cochrane January 4, 2012 at 11:59 AM Well written. I especially like your verse: "opposites control revolving kaleidoscope serene destruction" Janet Vick January 4, 2012 at 3:19 PM Thank you. I had first hand experince when my mom became too difficult to handle at home. Again, thanks for reading. Take care. Janet