Always Hurt the One You Love

to always hurt the one you love, seen in myself the nasty blood, temper foul goes hand in glove, nastiness, regrets the grub . i don’t judge you babe, you are all, you are, support for anything I crave, and i am happy with your love, you are my special star. love and hate 2 sides of the same coin, both intense, judge mental, like a kick in the bloody groin, does love make the temperamental, (or just mental) does jealousy purloin, or is it incidental. so cross ya eyes and dot your tees, there's no winners it’s your fate, so swallow your pride , don’t run and hide, just crawl back through the gate.... Don Johnson Destroyer ~ Poet 3rd Contest Name any poem goes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 11/28/2011 6:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Don. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/26/2011 1:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this amazing write! Lori
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Date: 11/24/2011 12:44:00 PM
great rhyme Don, congrats on your win
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Date: 11/24/2011 10:18:00 AM
Enjoyed this read Don. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 11/23/2011 11:33:00 PM
DON, ;-) stopping by to Wish you a happy THANKSGIVING! Also to congratulate you in my "any poem goes contest`" Have yourself a wonderful and lovely holiday. God Bless,.. p.d.
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Date: 11/24/2011 1:20:00 AM
thank you for my place right here, its hard to write stuff so sincere, Happy thanksgiving lovely lady....dj
Date: 4/30/2011 8:51:00 AM
Painful analyzation. Most of us don't know what true love really is. We hurt those close, because we have our own fears and frustrations, and those who are near receive the back end of it, if one does not find a constructive way of outlet. Communication is important but before that, another's happiness must be more important than our own. Thought provoking, Don! Well done! Caroline.
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Date: 4/29/2011 7:44:00 PM
passionate piece
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Date: 4/29/2011 1:29:00 PM
An intense dramatic piece DON and one most can relate to with luv relationships going high and low ... an emotion that peaks and plunges in one breath... u captured the essence of it all luv.. happy weekend...
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