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11/ 17/ 24

Even Broken ......

Third Place

Contest by Anoucheka Gangabisson 

Always Bold

         Even broken I'm bold enough 
        I breathe hope at every moment.
        As pessimist not to lament. 
        Ambition shines on firmament.

        At every breathe dazzling my hope.
         Ready to use the exact scope.
         Always rational, not to grope.
                                Even life appearing too tough.

         At every moment hope to breathe.
         Dynamism inspires to seethe.
         Positivity to get sheathed.
                                   Even when path of life turns rough.

         Ray of hope to enlighten me
         No stagnancy, progressing free,
         though Future is never to see.
                                  lf grief stricken, I try to laugh.

       Heart is broken ?  But hope beats drum.
         Courage is pivot , also fulcrum.
         I will bounce back on strength - spectrum.
                             Overcoming rue I will burp.
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Williams Avatar
November 28, 2025 at 11:12 AM
I LOVE your third last line, "Courage is pivot, also fulcrum"! That reminds me that recovering from whatever challenge is enabled not only by bouncing back (i.e., using a fulcrum), but also by having the courage and discretion to move in a different (even if only slightly) direction (i.e., pivot). Thank you so much for sharing, Anisha, and congratulations on your win! :) Very best, Bartholomew
Dutta Avatar
November 29, 2025 at 6:38 AM
Thanks for visit and appreciation. Have Good Days.
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