Emile Pinet Poet Rhyme

Always Be There

Why give up and no longer try;
try to help me understand why.
Dying dreams cause constant crying;
crying, for our dreams are dying.
You once swore that your love was true,
true is all that I ask of you.

Youth circumvents unbending truth,
truth is more flexible to youth.
Love cannot be built upon lies;
lies can't support the weight of love.
There was a time you used to care,
care implied you’d always be there.

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Line Gauthier March 8, 2018 at 8:27 AM A most pleasant read, Emile. Your MIRROR SESTET is a very effective and well executed. Emile Pinet March 8, 2018 at 9:53 AM Thanks Line, I appreciate you insightful comments. Emile.

Jaycee Cervenka July 15, 2015 at 7:33 PM I'm not sure this is a form I could tackle. Its complex and metered, which reay takes a lot of thought in the creation. Well done Emile. A 7 Jaycee Cervenka July 20, 2015 at 2:10 PM Whenever I start highly structured forms with specific metered rythm, I loose my train of thought and end up with gobbledy gook.( sighs) I do well to get out quatrains of iambic hectometer or pentometer, without the specific word placement. I may try but no promises it won't hit the trash bin..lol Emile Pinet July 16, 2015 at 10:00 AM Thanks Janet, I'm sure that with your talent, you could do this form justice, don't underestimate your skills and abilities, I don't. Emile.

Eve Roper July 15, 2015 at 5:12 PM It is truly wonderful I will give it a try, a 7 Hugs Eve Emile Pinet July 16, 2015 at 9:58 AM Thanks Eve, I appreciate your friendly words of encouragement and support. Emile.

Poet Destroyer A July 15, 2015 at 4:21 PM enjoyed your write Emile, Luv p.d. Emile Pinet July 16, 2015 at 9:57 AM Thanks p.d., your input is always welcome. Emile.

Andrea Dietrich July 15, 2015 at 3:29 PM love seeing you work with a form like this. It's a really cool one. This one is like a lesson of wisdom in love. very nice! Emile Pinet July 16, 2015 at 9:56 AM Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your wonderful words of encouragement and support. Emile.

Tim Smith July 14, 2015 at 2:53 PM Wow Emile. I'll leave this form alone. You did it so well...Tim Emile Pinet July 15, 2015 at 8:06 AM Thanks Tim, I appreciate your friendly words of support. Emile.