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The first time I saw you, your beauty captivated my heart, Yet I didn’t know that things between us would start. The evening we shared a gaze, I yearned to confess, As time stood still, for a moment to undress. The true meaning of our mutual attraction. Everything seemed so tranquil and right, When we made love by day, knowing it couldn’t happen at night. Our second encounter was mind blowing to me, Your sexy and beautiful that what I see. I had to, I have to, have you each day, Or I will be as a flower withering away. Your are magnificently sumptuous, scrumptious to eat, With tantalising enticing rhythmic hips that hypnotise to a soothing beat. The words fail me, what more can I say, I had to, I have to, have you each day. © 2000

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/3/2011 7:16:00 AM
Emotional and passionate Sid, wonderful verse for the winner's place!
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Date: 12/1/2011 6:54:00 AM
Congrats on your win love it.x
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Date: 11/30/2011 9:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P. D.'s "first love poem (on the soup)" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/29/2011 5:14:00 PM
Congratulations, on your success, a hot little number I think... nice job Sydney... Cheers Margaret
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Date: 11/28/2011 10:52:00 PM
what do you mean , knowing it can't be by night? what a bummer!! A cool sexy poem, Sidney. gosh I haven't seen you in ages! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/28/2011 10:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Sidney
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Date: 11/28/2011 9:57:00 PM
oh! wow! I'm happy to see your poem was entered in my contest.,, Congratulations on your wonderful win, with your "first love poem on the soup" I would also like to thank you for the support in my contest. Take care, and have yourself a great night,. ;-) ~p.d.
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Date: 6/5/2011 3:26:00 PM
Hi, S. M.P.,,! How is my mellodramticLondon Friend. And how is the babies... well if anyone knows the beauty of a heart it will be you my friend.. That is why you have your last write set on the love for women...lol... now how thoughtful is that... gees!!! at least you see how wonderful we women are... enjoyed your first poem,..p.d.
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Date: 10/12/2010 3:56:00 PM
tHANKS FOR GOING BACK IN TIME! IN READING MY FIRST POEM. I ENJOYED YOUR COMMENT, Sidney! *LOL* BEAUTY IS ALWAYS THE START TO HYPNOTISING THE HEART. lOVE YOUR POEM. bEAUTY MADE U YOU. cool, CAT ARE YOU*luv~SKAT
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Date: 3/17/2010 5:46:00 PM
Sidney congrats on your poem being featured this week. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/17/2010 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Sidney. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/14/2010 10:35:00 PM
Well written verse. Congratulations my friend for being featured this week. Ernilando
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Date: 2/22/2010 2:12:00 PM
very beautiful show of affection, shows a healthy mindfulness of the self as well
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