Altruism

Big hearts love the world but may let too much in, too fast, too soon; the sense of self stretched to breaking. Ego becomes fantasy, a dream of emotional origins. The world shifts away from touch, The mind is helpless to operate on the future.

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Skat A

Date: 10/4/2016 7:53:00 PM

Brian Uldall, you did good. skat

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/3/2016 4:36:00 AM

Brian, #2, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@