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Although Short is our existence on planet earth Eternal Are the consequences of our actions In heaven! © Demetrios Trifiatis 21 February 2019

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Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 2/22/2019 12:15:00 AM

Very true... Short but has a deep meaning.. js like life... Short but meaningful actions make it eternal. Beautiful :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/22/2019 1:23:00 AM

Truth must be naked , don't you think? Haha Wearing lots of clothes (words) may hide its figure! Lol. Thank you so much for lovely visit!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/21/2019 8:02:00 AM

We have to account for it all in the end..well said my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/21/2019 8:12:00 AM

Well, that's the way it goes my friend, Vijay! Do people really care? If they did, would there be so much crime? Thank you so much!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/21/2019 2:53:00 AM

So true Demetrios, we will reap what we sow. Tom.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/21/2019 12:00:00 PM

Just re reading part three.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/21/2019 4:52:00 AM

Absolutely my friend, Tom! Don't delay part II, please! Lol! Haha Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/21/2019 2:42:00 AM

- Our actions, even our thoughts, have consequences ... always take good and positive choices in life :) - Excellent written, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 2/21/2019 4:51:00 AM

True dearest, Anne-Lise, but thinking of killing someone is not the same as killing that person! One is worst than the other! Thank you so very much! Hugs xxx