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" OUR ACTIONS " MY PHOTO, ©

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Although

Although 

Short is our existence on planet earth

Eternal

Are the consequences of our actions 

In heaven!






© Demetrios Trifiatis
     21 February 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Vangaveti Avatar
February 22, 2019 at 12:15 AM
Very true... Short but has a deep meaning.. js like life... Short but meaningful actions make it eternal. Beautiful :)
Trifiatis Avatar
February 22, 2019 at 1:23 AM
Truth must be naked , don't you think? Haha Wearing lots of clothes (words) may hide its figure! Lol. Thank you so much for lovely visit!
Pandit Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 8:02 AM
We have to account for it all in the end..well said my friend.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 8:12 AM
Well, that's the way it goes my friend, Vijay! Do people really care? If they did, would there be so much crime? Thank you so much!
Cunningham Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 2:53 AM
So true Demetrios, we will reap what we sow. Tom.
Cunningham Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 12:00 PM
Just re reading part three.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 4:52 AM
Absolutely my friend, Tom! Don't delay part II, please! Lol! Haha Thank you!
Andresen Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 2:42 AM
- Our actions, even our thoughts, have consequences ... always take good and positive choices in life :) - Excellent written, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
February 21, 2019 at 4:51 AM
True dearest, Anne-Lise, but thinking of killing someone is not the same as killing that person! One is worst than the other! Thank you so very much! Hugs xxx
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