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Alphabetical Freedom

Amidst speaking and listening Blue shirts fly in cool breeze Calling the pleasure pulsating Dollops of cream from fridge Eavesdrops curious time Finding some dancing lakes Grey surrounding mankind Hands sharing pink shakes Indulgent minds unconscious Jasmine-rain steps in King-size gladiolus Loves lyrical whispering Moments of life time memory Not stopping the sunflower words Of the delightful discovery Prodding the migratory birds ______________________________________ 3/9/2016:Alphabet Soup - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Merryman

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Eve Roper

Date: 9/4/2016 10:26:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this type of form are not easy, Probir, good luck in the contest

Probir Gupta
Date: 9/5/2016 5:39:00 AM

Thank you, Eve, you have all along been very encouraging ...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/4/2016 4:11:00 AM

A great entry Probir on a challenging form. 7 ; )

Probir Gupta
Date: 9/4/2016 6:03:00 AM

Perhaps you prefer metaphoric representation of certain core things including nature ... anyway, thank you ... Mere form cannot fetch success ... the reader's perception is important ....

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/3/2016 7:51:00 AM

Well done Probir, I enjoyed reading you today. I'll have a couple of dollops of that ice cream! Good luck in contest.

Probir Gupta
Date: 9/4/2016 5:58:00 AM

Thank you ...