Aloof


Disdainful moon,
Scrutinized my happiness
And unparalleled delight
Delight that she once felt
Towards her only light
Light that made her beautiful
And displayed her unrivaled might
Might that gradually fading
Because of her shattered pieces heart
Heart that caused her to be secluded,
Torn asunder, and apart
Apart that will no longer be together
And be like exquisite finest art
Art that appreciates beauty 
Of the lost and isolated
Disdainful moon

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Skat A

April 15, 2015 at 6:32 PM

JAY, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Jay-Ar Arpon

April 16, 2015 at 12:55 AM

My pleasure to be your friend, thank you for the kind words, I will tell you after this week kind of busy with my college life.

Poet Destroyer A

April 11, 2015 at 9:57 PM

Thank you for the nice reply

Poet Destroyer A

April 10, 2015 at 8:34 PM

Jay-ar Arpon, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Jay-Ar Arpon

April 10, 2015 at 11:05 PM

I will Linda, Thanks for the warm welcome