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Aloof Shoddy attire with a slow gait, Unkempt hair and unshaven face, Express my depressed state. Before the fall they did me berate; My self-confidence reduced to waste. So, I dress shoddily and slow gait. My body odour permeates Because I do not bathe, Express my depressed state. The dumpster serves my taste. On streets, I beg, ‘spare change!’ In shoddy attire with a slow gait. Tragic they say, ‘a living disgrace!’ I stay aloof since I quit the race And don’t explain my depressed state. I’m not lazy, I’m debased And accept my fate. Shoddy attire with a slow gait, Express my depressed state.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 2/23/2022 11:03:00 AM
Dennis, this is a very deep look into a very deep well. I appreciate your sensitivity to the artist's soul and struggles. Thank you for sharing this.
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 2/27/2022 3:15:00 AM
I sincerely appreciate your analysis and encouraging comments. Thank you.

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