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Along With Your Silence I Stroll

Walk through this world with me
feed and awaken my soul
share all my dreams with me
along with your silence I stroll.

Reach down deep into a loving heart
walk through my morbid fears
allow not a wealth to fall apart
pick my Self up, deafen the sound of my tears.

Walk through this world with me
I need to feel your kindling power
share all my dreams with me
I'll live through what is sweet and sour.

A journey of many a loss, a Light to reach
blowing the dust off, a gem would glitter and win
If only the book of Nature would me teach
the flame of harmony would ever glow and never dim.

Walk through this world with me
paint mysterious stories of no ending
share all my dreams with me
on dark paths, we blend colours and keep ascending.

In Life, we reach souls and bloom
the road is long and the pleasure is strong
we learn to build in the heart many a room
and yearn for the realm to where we belong.


The lines used :
(Walk through this world with me
Share all my dreams with me)
George Jones song : 'Walk Through This World With Me'

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Timothy Hicks Date: 5/12/2020 7:32:00 PM "we learn to build in the heart many a room"... I'm not familiar with this song, but you wrote some great poetry from the inspiration of it! There are many avenues in the heart that are open for rent if we let it .... you have an easygoing style that is very inviting to read and digest your meanings. Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 5/16/2020 9:09:00 AM The chambers of the heart can but be owned to dwell there a lifetime or sweet moments in time.. or just abandoned to seek another abode.. Timothy, I would like to thank you so much from the depth of my heart for your sincere feedbacks and for your precious time you allotted to my humble work.. so honoured and so blessed.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Justin Bordner Date: 2/24/2020 9:39:00 PM I just love the possibilities of meaning in the title of this evocative poem Besma. "Allow not a wealth to fall apart, pick up my Self, deafen the sound of my tears..." There's a soulful intimacy in your poetry...J.A.B. A FAV! Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 2/28/2020 3:14:00 PM When despite the possibilities of the piece of Art the reader touches the mind of the poet, that's wonderful! Thank you so much, Justin for feeling my very words! My deepest regards and blessings.

Paul Callus Date: 1/8/2020 6:44:00 AM You erect your poems in silence and bring out excellent results, Besma. Your invitation to walk with you is most welcome, even if in the process it could mean tasting both sweet and sour. You show faith in what you do, as you "blend colours and keep ascending". ~ Warm regards & Blessings // paul Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 1/8/2020 2:45:00 PM A most valued and rewarding feedback! A most elating and wonderful response! Walking a path of beauty and light.. sharing and caring.. along with like-minded souls whose Love is their most powerful asset, is my honour and great delight! So pleased reading your fine words, Paul.. my warmest wishes. Best regards and blessings to you.

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 12/14/2019 1:00:00 PM WoW! Such a beautiful poem, Riabi! You have such a gracious pen voice. And this love poem is so transcendent ... the silence speaks w/dove purity. GrEaT poetry! Love and more love always. Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 12/19/2019 5:31:00 AM How dare I raise a voice when silence seals every single sound! No words could ever meet the wealth of the world of Silence.. Thank you so much, Freddie, for reading and feeling the language of silence and writing so wonderful a feedback! My deepest regards and blessings.

Panagiota Romios Date: 12/11/2019 1:04:00 PM What a moving, well written poem Besma! "We blend colors and keep ascending" I will be thinking of that line all day. Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 12/14/2019 10:10:00 AM And what a rewarding feedback, Panagiota! Deeply humbled! Thank you so much for your generosity and kindness.. my deepest regards and blessings.

Quoth Theraven Date: 12/7/2019 9:37:00 PM Besma, Your poem 'Along With Your Silence I Stroll' is an inspired blessing. A write filled with such longing, my oh my. You must be a blessing, though longing too. Thank you my blessing. -Richard Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 12/9/2019 9:51:00 AM I can't thank you enough for such an amazing and uplifting feedback, Richard.. thank you heaps for your generosity and kindness.. you do honour my humble work.. Best regards and blessings.

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 12/2/2019 8:57:00 AM A talented poetess with a wonderful academic re-fineness evident in all that you pen my dear Besma. Love you soul sister, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 12/9/2019 9:42:00 AM Dearest Jenny, what a delight reading your praising words to my humble poetry.. it is thanks to a remarkable humility and generosity stemming from a beautiful soul like you, soul sister that my pen strives to attain one iota beauty.. thank you so much for your generosity and rewarding feedback.. my love and hugs. Blessings.

Robert Lindley Date: 11/30/2019 8:43:00 AM Thank you my friend, as it is a blessing to find and read this beautiful poetry this morn! Your skill as a poet is top class.... A very wonderful poem for me to add to my fav list ... God bless.. Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 12/9/2019 9:36:00 AM Blessed I am to have wonderful and grand poets read, appreciate and praise my humble work.. thank you so much, Robert, for your beautiful and uplifting feedback.. deeply grateful for your sincere support and encouragement. Best regards and blessings.

M. L. Kiser Date: 11/24/2019 5:59:00 PM Incredibly lovely piece with great feeling and sentiments. Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 11/30/2019 4:36:00 AM So kind and generous of you, M.L. Kiser, to write such wonderful feedback! Thank you so much.. My best regards and blessings.

Maria Williams Date: 11/24/2019 12:01:00 AM Besma my dearest friend an extraordinary reflection that peals loudly through the Silence. It reminds me of a book I once read by Sara Maitland where she says this...... Silence does not seem to be a loss or lack of language; it does not even seem to be the opposite of language. I have found it to be a whole world in and of itself, alongside language and culture, but independent of it. It comes from a different place altogether. Well constructed, I especially love the last 4 lines. A fave for the list....Maria Hug Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 11/30/2019 4:33:00 AM Indeed, silence that whole world of its very codes... When we are connected with silence, we are taken to other realms and dimensions.. Sweet dearest Maria, I am sure that you have tasted its wonders and unveiled its mysteries.. Always a great delight flows into my heart whenever i read your insightful and beautiful words.. Ever grateful.. thank you so much.. Love and hugs.

Vijay Pandit Date: 11/21/2019 3:26:00 PM WOW! The tone and flow of your poem is awesome--enjoyed the journey through this song of life--so expertly executed in rhythm. Superb lines like: paint mysterious stories of no ending..and an inspirational, upbeat message, Besma. I am saving this poem in my FAVEs. Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 11/23/2019 9:41:00 AM So much obliged to you dear Vijay for your generous and uplifting feedback.. Your great support is highly appreciated.. thank you heaps.. my warmest wishes and regards.. Blessings to you.

Silent One Date: 11/21/2019 3:13:00 PM Nothing more wonderful than walking with silence...we all need someone on our joHenry to love us and be with us... Lovely poem.. Login to Reply Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 11/23/2019 9:35:00 AM So pleased to read your meaningful words on my humble poem, Silent One.. thank you so much for being here to support and encourage.. Regards and blessings.