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Along Windy Way

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Written: November 28, 2023 ______________________________________ Beneath the sweltering luminescent sky. A thunderbolt flared over the silent firefly. Oak-smoke tones and vanilla bean paste. Swung idly, draped as moss from a baste. Tintinnabulation caused by wind-borne sighs. The gentle quiet of flora roughness is dry. Evenfall cobalt-wrapped nascent starlight. A crescent-shaped moon is gloaming in flight. An avalanche of a billion Katydid wing beats Cricket voices in a range of alto to bass feats My gem-encrusted flame bursts and spits. Beneath a benumbed bowl, boiling hiss. My soul finds solace in the lichened death fall. I was thrilled by the fire and the creepy owl call. A soft mist falls across drooping eyelids. amid the dancing stars and firefly skids.

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Date: 11/29/2023 8:49:00 AM
such stunning artistic poetry, dear Sotto! I am breathless after having read your words. Your rhyme scheme is superb, but the imagery is what caught my attention. Wow! The use the word 'Tintinnabulation' was a powerful way to express ringing. Even now, that word rings and echoes in my mind. This line I especially liked: An avalanche of a billion Katydid wing beats...fabulous imagery filled with energy. Just a superb poem, Sotto. I commend and applaud you. Faving this one. enjoy your day, Sara
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