Along Time Ago

along time ago 
a man once told me
i was to die

he told me 
he'd kill me
watch me bleed

stand over me
and laugh
licking my life off the blade

i didnt beleive him
till he took his life
and shortly 

i folowed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bono Avatar
November 30, 2009 at 12:53 PM
And people think mine are powerful.
Pickett Avatar
November 24, 2009 at 7:28 PM
Okay>>>> If these are a cry for help, than mama you need some love in your life..... Let me help.. ............Soup Mail........:JP]
Bono Avatar
November 24, 2009 at 12:03 PM
You have soup mail
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November 24, 2009 at 11:47 AM
Sad but true.You have soup mail
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