Along the Shores of Distant Dreams

Along the shores of distant dreams beyond horizon’s stare, of stardust eyes and ventured seas in timeless journeys fair I call out in a desperate tone afloat this ocean view, on waves eternal cast alone in thoughts of only you For if these waters claim their prize in white capped angered form, to fall in fear, dark clouded skies in passion's mighty storm And when the deep shall take my breath below its surfaced chill, I’ll hold your love with me in death and I forever will
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kannan Avatar
November 7, 2016 at 6:59 AM
Such a beautiful poem...Lovely write indeed... A big 7...
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November 7, 2016 at 7:07 AM
Thank you so very much for your kind words Supraja.
Daniel Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 8:51 AM
I love this poem of longing:) I'm in awe of your talent, Chris:)an unquestionable 7:)
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November 7, 2016 at 6:20 AM
Thank you so very much Jo. Your kind words this weekend on my poetry have lifted my spirits and brought a huge smile to my face.
Chircop Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 4:05 PM
The deepest ocean shall never take your breath.You'll rise and fall to rise again over the tide..the pain ..as man... Her love you'd hold ..and that desperate tone will change into a warrior's song..Oh this poem of yours is so inspiring...As you can see..A favourite .
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November 7, 2016 at 6:20 AM
Your comments Charmaine on my poetry are poetry to me. Your words are always so uplifting and encouraging. I appreciate your visits more than you know. Thank you so much.
Smith Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 3:42 PM
A beautiful poem of longing Chris.
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November 7, 2016 at 6:16 AM
Thanks so much Tim. I am glad you liked it.
Yvonne Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 11:42 AM
I'm with everyone else. A Fav.
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November 7, 2016 at 6:16 AM
Thanks so much Maurice for your kindness.
Sands Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 11:00 AM
Wow, another favorite of mine. Beautiful, sweet comfort!
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November 7, 2016 at 6:15 AM
Thank you so very much Heidi. I always look forward to your visits and your nice comments.
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