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Along the Shore Line

I walk along the margins, of the shoreline of the sea, gathering abandoned shells, in search of a sea star; a tumultuous tide rushes and bellows ~ wild and free. I build castles, bridged with moats and towers with glee; sculpting sand for a grand chateau, designed for a czar. I walk along the margins of the shoreline of the sea. My glory dampened; no building here, has a guarantee. Hungry seagulls swoop for fish, on frothy foam and spar; A tumultuous tide rushes and bellows ~ wild and free. I stumble upon sand crabs, scuttling near dunes, so wee. At the rim of the horizon, sailing ships, appear from afar. I walk along the margins of the shoreline of the sea. I venture to an obsidian ledge, at a ninety angle degree; waves slamming and crashing, dispersing into a reservoir. A tumultuous tide rushes and bellows ~ wild and free. Gazing at the view, images of impressionists I see; the masterpieces of Courbet, Degas, Monet and Renoir. A tumultuous tide rushes and bellows wild ~ and free; I walk along the margins, of the shoreline of the sea. Date: August 8, 2022 For: First Person Villanelle Poetry Contest Sponsored by: L. Milton Hankins Rhymes verified on rhymezone.com

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Date: 9/12/2022 6:34:00 PM
Incorporating the Painters in the end just made this so wonderful to appreciate Paulette. Congratulations on writing... Be blessed...
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 9/14/2022 11:47:00 AM
Hi Michael, thank you for stopping by ~ you always have such up lifting comments. :)Paulette
Date: 9/2/2022 2:39:00 PM
My heartiest compliments on your trophy win, Paulette, as yours was an exceptionally skilled piece, my friend, Aloha~William
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Date: 9/3/2022 5:32:00 AM
You should put it directly with Milton to clarify his intentions, and he can check with Team Poetry Soup to check their system for possible glitches, at any rate, its a winner to me, Paulette, Aloha~William
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 9/3/2022 4:50:00 AM
Thank you William. But I am confused….a trophy does appear but I am not included in the line up of winners….? Can you explain that? :)Paulette
Date: 8/21/2022 8:51:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. I could see the scene of the tumultuous sea. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 8/21/2022 9:12:00 AM
Sara, thank you for also visiting my page~you also made my day. You always have such uplifting comments. I wish us both a placement in the contest! :)Paulette
Date: 8/9/2022 1:16:00 AM
Your walk along the beach is fabulous. I like its connection to the great painters. I appreciate the Impressionists a lot.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 8/21/2022 9:13:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor~glad I was able to bring images of the great Impressionists to you. :)Paulette
Date: 8/8/2022 5:00:00 PM
I loved this walk along the beach with you. I am missing being away from the sea. Excellent Villanelle, Paulette. SuZ
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 8/21/2022 9:14:00 AM
SuZ, thank you ~ the sea is definitely a powerful place, once we have experienced it, it becomes indelible ~ glad I could bring you along the beach with me. :)Paulette

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