Along Cherry Blossom Lane

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tiny parachutes free-falling in the wind... pink stars at sundown
________________________________________ For Cherry Blossom Contest: Sponsored by Black Eyed Susan
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April 22, 2013 at 6:59 PM
Carrie, a very sweet and lovely win :-) Congratulations in Susan's "Cherry Blossom Haiku" contest. Your poem is awesome with imagery. always & forever-LINDA
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April 22, 2013 at 8:39 AM
Simply beautiful! I loved it so much more than my own! RAY
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April 21, 2013 at 9:15 AM
Big hearty congratulations on your super win my dear friend Carrie! I really love your great haiku! Cheers! Love & hugs, Leonora
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April 21, 2013 at 2:00 AM
Many congratulations Carrie, love this xx
Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 11:32 PM
I just loved it!!! Congrats, Carrie.
Guzzi Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 7:24 PM
Congrad's Light & Love
Poet Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 1:53 AM
wow!Wondeful!
Collins Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 8:17 AM
What a sweet haiku. Not one line is out of place and each one good as the other. Classic. love, Kathy
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April 12, 2013 at 11:31 AM
tHIS IS RIGID... MARvel pen~A.O
Ober Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 8:44 AM
Oh, Carrie, this haiku is stunning. I'm adding it to my favourites. Your talent amazes me!
Ryerson Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 6:06 AM
'Tiny parachutes'...Perfect - Tim
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April 11, 2013 at 9:14 AM
Cherry blossoms are beautiful, and this poem is even better. Wishing you well in the contest.
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April 11, 2013 at 6:25 AM
SO AWESOME
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April 11, 2013 at 3:29 AM
love this love the visual, and all the different aspect that come to mind...
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April 10, 2013 at 7:16 PM
Dear Carrie, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Congratulations, I have read many of the Cherry Bloosom entrees..Not only could I see the"Tiny parachutes "as I walked with YOU:I could smell the Pie.Thank-YOU for YOUR much appreciated comment on my POEM "The Backside of Killington Mountain. I could have written about MT.Shasta in the same regard.Sorry I have not spoke with YOU in so long. LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry
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